Re-Writes..."7 Deadly Sins"

“wrath. gluttony. lust. greed. envy. pride. sloth. the seven deadly sins have a common bond, in that they all deal with the effects a woman can have on a man. and i don’t even have to use separate examples to explain each one. i’ll just make up a situation. a man works hard at his job but he doesn’t make big bucks. his woman sits at home all day, watching soap operas. she sees how the rich people live on television and longs for a better life, their lives. thus, the man comes home to a barrage of insults about his low paycheck and slightly balding head. this lowers the man’s self-esteem and he finds comfort in eating. the woman notices the man becoming overweight and begins to focus her attention on the rich neighbor next door. she starts to fantasize about having his money. she wants expensive things and will use him to get them. she flirts with him when they are alone. the neighbor notices her. he realizes he has other women but his ego compliments his player skills and he decides he can handle one more. he loves the fact that women love him. he asks the woman to his house. he gives her a diamond necklace and decides to thank him by giving him sex. but her man hasn’t been unaware of what was going on. he has followed her. and as his woman and the neighbor cuddle in the bed, anger fills the man and begins to fire bullet after bullet into both of them. and as the last breath escapes the woman, he rips the necklace off her bloody throat. he puts it in his pocket, drops the gun, and walks away. seven deadly sins because of a woman. the greatest sin of all.”

sometime in '99, i don't remember the exact date.